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A Poem by Sammi
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I don't feel at home where I live, but there is one place I go to get away from it all. A 6 story carpark. Sounds weird I know.

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There she stands
Hands on the barrier
Staring out across a city that will never truely be home.

© 2011 Sammi


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Yes it;s only 3 lines, but when I extended it the poem just seemed to lose its focus.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on March 15, 2011
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Sammi
Sammi

Doncaster, Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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I'm 16 years old and I live in England. I have been writing poetry/songs/short stories for as long as I can remember but I have never really had anywhere to keep them all and get feedback... So here I.. more..