Seltzer Water

Learning how to love when you only want to push people away.

It’s good for stains, it takes the dirt right out.

I close the top.

Clean.

But you don’t feel this BURSTING inside me!  

Bubble.

Scrub.

Bubble.

Floating to the top.

BURST.

Falling into you.

Author's Note

Inspired by bad laundry advice.

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Carbonating out the stains of a bad relationship only washes evidence from the surface – inner tarnish takes longer! Strong imagery, flow and combination of words – very nice read! :-)

[golden]

I agree! Thanks for reading :)