Poetry

Poetry is something

That could be your life.

Releasing expressions

Without a face or mouth.

Yes, it could be short

or made into a book.

It is also known

That it does not

Have to rhyme.

So remember this,

You could be deaf,

You could be blind,

Poetry can fix it all.

From beginning to end.

 

Reviews

[The Last Philospher]

Hello,
I've read a couple of your poems and I feel like I should give you some feedback. I notice that a lot of your poems have brief lines and an ongoing verse. I've just gotten into poetry so I don't have much credentials to judge your format, but when I read it I feel like your trying to force a pause. When I read I love it when the writer allows me to pause right when I need it, here it's like driving on a road with constant speed bumps.
Content wise I like your topics, they are something I and many other writers can relate to; yet you can go deeper. Much deeper.
My review was written in the hope that you wouldn't take it personally and instead use it if you see it as useful. I hope to bump into your writing later.