Raindrops

Rain on my window

Drops of heaven quench this thirst
Make me whole again

Author's Note

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Roll the window down. Take the rain.

[Tiffany K Charles]

A short prayer that speaks so many words!! Wonderful and powerful. You did a great job executing your thoughts

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely metaphorical.......
j.

[Lisasview]

First read of yours Jodash and I so se enjoy poems that have hidden meaning... Metaphors ...
Quite clever...and does make one think!!
Lisasview, now in Spain

[Kane Hagwood]

I honestly miss the rain. I'm from Washington, now living in the sunny state of California. I think I've seen it rain maybe once since I've been here. There's something special about when it rains. Thanks for sharing this lovely Haiku with us, Jodash.

[Ms claws]

Wow! Just those few words and the entire piece is wrapped up with a bow! I like this!