A Child's Dream

love is but a child’s dream

and that is all it’s meant to be

but still we’ll sit intimately

you, me, and our childhood dream

Reviews

[Gaia Octavia]

I really like this and I agree. Our perception of love when we are young is almost always unattainable and unrealistic. Some of us never quite get there no matter how old we grow ☺ Nice job!

[stargirl23]

Thank you so much!

[Carolynn]

Hmm thinking of love as a child's dream seems like a person who maybe hasn't experience real love yet. Quite honestly I sometimes wonder if any of us really know the TRUE meaning of love so this is a good way to look at it, maybe we are all coming at it in a childish way? Good poem to make you think! I like that!

[stargirl23]

Yes, of course there are different views of love, you can even see in many movies and TV shows how different characters approach love. It's strange, and maybe I haven't experienced real love yet. Thank you for your thoughts! And I'm happy it was thought-provoking:)

[Solar]

Yesterday's dreams, future realisations - love prevails

[stargirl23]

I was actually writing with a more depressing take on love, but that's what's great about poetry:)

[Cyndy Robinson]

I like this, think once upon a time should be added to it, lol!

[stargirl23]

Where would you have thought I should put it?