Weather, I See

rays of light embolden your smile-lines

a pale-palette sky darkens your mouth

rain from above slides under your eyes

lightning reflects in the black clouds of your pupils

golden light turns you into a different color

a hurricane spins us ’round

an earthquake causes us to split

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I feel your words as I read them. Your unique way of expressing yourself is amazing.

[stargirl23]

Thanks again for you kind words:)

[Cyndy Robinson]

Very well done, and I love the ending. Its fabulous!

[stargirl23]

Thank you a lot!

[Jazzlyn B Barden]

So beautiful, and captivating. Great work:)

[stargirl23]

Thank you so much!!

[Ruth]

Beautiful and so potently reaching Adi...you really captivated so much here, fabulous! :)

[stargirl23]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep up the great work!!

[stargirl23]

Thanks so much!!