Wired

what they don’t describe ever

are humanity’s wires

for inside each man, woman, and child

lie tens of thousands of outlets

and right at birth, the men in suits set

all the wires into “love”

Reviews

[Cyndy Robinson]

I love this. You have a very interesting thought process. It is fun to see what you come up with. Well done!

[stargirl23]

Thank you a lot I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Ruth]

Interesting...nice surprise they set them to love...an unconditional human trait, if only more saw that, lovely :)

[stargirl23]

Thank youu so much:)

[dan]

Adi, this is such a wonderful concept and well described. All of our "wires" sometimes get crossed and calamity ensues. But you devised a perfect piece of wiring that ends the source of power at "love." And "the men in suits" leaves a bit of mystery for the reader to interpret. Excellent piece! take care...dan

[stargirl23]

thank you so much!!

[Emily]

I really like this one!
Keep it up!!

[stargirl23]

thank you:)