A Memory

I’ve dwelled for too long

on this one past memory

it gains significance each time

I’ve made it a hyperbole

a crumb from rotten fruit cake

that at first appealed to me

inundated in saliva

it’s been changing slowly

soggy, decayed, drained of flavor

yet until sleep comes, it’s all I see

Reviews

[Cyndy Robinson]

I love this. I love your imagery with what you write. Simplicity and chrystal clear!

[stargirl23]

Thank you:)

[dan]

Adi, this piece resonates with a hushed brilliance. Such a compact container of a myriad of feeling, imagery and emotion entwined like a finely loomed tapestry. You may well be one of the most talented writers here on WC. Keep sending me RRs please. take care...dan

[stargirl23]

Thank you so much that meant a lot! May I say I loved the imagery in your review

[Emily]

I really like this one!
The wording is the best!!

[stargirl23]

Thank you so much!