Society

the unjust court

we call society

turns out anxiety

supernatural ideals

our life becomes a schedule

imitating

our goal is becoming

well-rounded prodigious sculptures

Reviews

[Cyndy Robinson]

aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, this I can get into, wish it was longer. Someday I am going to write a poem about society being robots, grins.

[stargirl23]

Glad you agreed with me, can't wait for your poem!

[Gaia Octavia]

I love this so much! You are clearly well tuned-in to the triviality of society, which given your age, is already great. But the way you put it into this poem makes it that much more remarkable. You are much wiser than your years might suggest. Well done!

[stargirl23]

Thank you so much!

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
I like the wording!
Keep it up!!

[stargirl23]

Thank you for the reviews!