Inside Outside

Inside Outside

A Poem by adreamygal
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A truth in 14 words!

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The commotion outside
disturbs
the peace inside

The silent inner
disturbs
the world outside

© 2012 adreamygal


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Nice truth, with a small amount of words. Nice Haiku. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


adreamygal

13 Years Ago

Thank you Joey! It isn't a haiku, just a random thought :) Glad you liked it :)
Joey Johnson

13 Years Ago

I went with haiku, reminded me of one. I still enjoyed it though.
adreamygal

13 Years Ago

Glad that it reminded you :) Thanks !! :)

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adreamygal
adreamygal

Chennai, India



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A girl full of dreams. Sometimes I feel I live in a dreamy world, at times dreams seems so distant. A girl whom everyone dreams of, sometimes never want to see even in their dreams. Dreams have broken.. more..