Just Ironic

You can't hear me screaming

my lungs out

while you're breathing

and I'm practically dieing. 

Amazing isn't it?

How you can't see me anymore

and just your s**t of a girlfriend.

Amazing isn't it?

How I just have this urge to spoon

your gutts out.

Or is that just

Ironic?

Reviews

[Meredith Leigh]

Wow, hardcore. I guess that's why I liked it. It was just so REAL! aha, awesome!

- Kriss

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Sure, now that he's moved on, he can't see or hear you
This is experienced by many and it is really painful

You portrayed it nicely:

" You can't hear me screaming
my lungs out
while you're breathing
and I'm practically dieing. "

Nice job!

[mae-mae<3]

This is a little freaky in a way that I love every line.
The goryness of the last few lines just pulls it together.
Nicely done Maddie.