Green

For Tovli's contest: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/7261/

 

Itchy

Grass

Long and Tall

Spring has many recipes for beauty.

 

Dance away everything in the green sea. 

Troubles gone

All right

Free

 

Butterflies and naiads dance in your dreams,

Dream of green swaying beautiful fields.

Have those springs and streams chase your mind away.

Wonderful cascades of pianist music,

 

In

Your

Ears

Listen.

 

Author's Note

For Tovli's contest: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/7261/ Ends April 30th
I had SO much fun writing this!!! :D

Reviews

[a]

Fantastic, absolutely by the rules, and so magically written.
Thank you!

[Kevin Vorshak]

Congratulations on your win in the Chug contest. Very nicely written piece and I can see why you were chosen. Good job! Loved the visuals!

[Tovli]

excellent--filled with imagery! tovli

[Seracies]

I liked all the green imagery and the flow of it, how you spaced everything out. Good job. =)

[.]

So full of colors and movement
I love the way you relate the field to that of a green sea - well thought
I love it
~Kavish~

[Meredith Leigh]

I thought it was very pretty, I love nature, green and warmer weather of course! This reminded me of New Foundland for some reason (it's in Canada incase you have no idea what I'm talking about) wow, it's beautiful!
Great work!

- Kriss