A Letter For Dr. Header

 And what you would you do if I never said I love you?

The stars are hanging low tonight.

I wonder if they have a fright when weighed down by impending gravity.

Critters and fish and cats and dogs are

Run

Run

Running

And

Swimm

Swimm

Swimming

Away from their homes.

Iblame you, I do, for shooting down my dreams and

Pop,

Pop,

Popping

All of my balloons.

The world is even sinking slowly. Even gravityy is depressed by your mess.

And hunny all of this trajedy is just the prologue.

 

p.s i never loved you, that was a beginnign + end in itself :3

Signed,

               Rachel <3

Author's Note

Originally written on May 7, 2009
Edited on May 19, 2009 and May 20, 2009

Reviews

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This is a real "f**k you" piece.
I love the edge and unreserved nature of this write.
Great work!

-Elissa :D

[lindsay]

i really like this. i can relate in a way. i love the run, run, running and so on.

very well written.

[Daniel]

Wow.
I really liked this!
So deep. :)

Keep it up!!

[Reaganwriter]

Nice job! I like the fact that you took the time to put the words in the right places, like, pop pop popping and all that. This is a pretty poem, very meaningful. Thanks for writing this!

[Shanny Rowanhill]

Love it. LOVE it. :D