Lost Ambition

 I’m feeling disconnected – the world must be on a different frequency than myself. How could I not know?

               

Uniqueness comes from your soul not from the next door neighbor’s closet. If you remember your heart, it will assist you. Do you see that bird flying through the sky? I do. That’s the difference between you and me. I smell roses, you smell perfumes. My face paint is natural. Yours is very cakey and thick. I can move my eye lashes, can you?

 

Tell me, are you lost in this cold, new world of lockers, dungeons, and windowless rooms? Too bad, get lost. Survival of the smartest. Life sucks for those with mushy brains.

STUPIDITY crawls through the hands of my peers. Their personalities smother me with

Originality. The room suffocates me to nonexistence.

And as I sit in my chair, I’m dreaming of running from it all.

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

Love the opening line.
Full of humor, mushy brains & all..

[*** Hey Jude***]

What a relatable write here. This heartfelt prose show the deep emotions of life's experience. Nice work! ~ Jude :-)

[Lauren Marie]

I loved this!
I hate giving reviews like this, because if I find no fault with the writing, how can I give a constructive review?
Oh well, I thought this was great; a reflection on how you (and I) both feel.

I also like the deep thinking you put into this writing and how you worded everything: "Their personalities smother me with originality." This is how I wish to write.

Ahh, this was beautiful!
A favorite!
~Lauren

[Lexi Nicole]

I absolutely love this, it's brilliant! The format, the language, perfect! It's got so much truth in it. Great work!

-Howl

[Poeticpiers]

rather cynical but essentially truthful commentary on todays world