Breathing Redemption

I've got to pull myself together.

I feel like I’m falling apart.

The seams of my heart are worn.

I’m waiting for you to come help me,

but you can only mend the torn.

You say I’ve got to get on my feet,

but I’m lazy with little motivation.

Pick my up, throw me down.

You’ll return me to the ground, from which I came.

Let’s hope that fate won’t be late.

It’s prudent I get this date;

This time with you, God.

I know you’re busy, but could you help me?

Reviews

[MiidniightSoul]

This is also very good...emotional and beautifully written

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

I like the tone of desperation in this section;
"Let’s hope that fate won’t be late.
It’s prudent I get this date;
This time with you, God.
I know you’re busy, but could you help me?"
This is a very well written write.
Keep up the excellent work.

-Elissa :)