Elemental Disregard

Elemental Disregard

A Poem by Aekmy

Life is a flickering candle. 
Wind will blow and the rain may wash you out,
 but in the end, it's the friend that does you in. 
He pinches the flame, suffocates you. 
You're strangled. With a swift burst of air, 
you're out like a light. 
Game over.

© 2011 Aekmy


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the imagery you create is fantastic. Short, but impacting. I like this :) Fantastic piece :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Aekmy

There is beauty is uniqueness. Embrace the strange or perish in the ordinary.



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