Cast Me No Mercy

Hopeless?

Cast me no mercy

I'm beyond hope and grace

Refuse me entry

No sinner dwells in Your place

Care for me no more

Save Your love for someone better

Lock the heaven's door

I don't deserve to be your daughter.

Announce my sin

It makes sense to torture me with shame

Curse my kin

Hate the blood that goes with my name

Loathe me please

Set my soul ablaze with eternal fire

Bring me to my knees

'til I change my heart's desire.

Reviews

[Inda]

No!! Just give in to that desire... I'm a bit of a devil's advicate. Seriously this is great stuff, surrender in a grand scale. Great job!

[Blue]

See you in hell, I suppose? LOL

[Inda]

Yep, we'll bbq! Lol

[Blue]

I'll sell ice cream there. Might be a good business considering the situation...

[David Scott]

Never feel this is the heart of your Heavenly Father... How could a loving father wish this for his child? How broken hearted would a perfect love feel knowing the min of His child in this moment. There is only love.
Simply desire the love that has always been available to you.
The mercy is to His own heart to hold you close and see you whole.
A heart tearing poem. Powerful Arzel!

[Blue]

Thank you so much, David. I must have been really down when I wrote this poem. :)

[ayosonolowo]

Wonderful! Indeed i love this poem

[Blue]

Thank you so much!

[Bluefire]

Amazing! I love the flow and rhythm set into this plea for hatred, this rebellious desire to do what you want and tell everyone else to go on ahead and hate.
Well done!

[Blue]

Thank you, Bluefire!

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^

[Amantle Moeng]

I feel like sharing this one on my facebook wall

[Blue]

Wow. Thank you...

[Cassie]

God is such a faithful God, however sinful we may be, he forgives us. That is what we call true love

[Blue]

Exactly. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Cassie.

[Saddam]

Loathe me please
Set my soul ablaze with eternal fire
Bring me to my knees
'til I change my heart's desire
A very dareful poetry to tell like this. Very diffrent and powerful poem. love it.

[Blue]

Thank you for reviewing my works, Ssadd.

[Saddam]

my pleasure dear...keep writing.

[Shaquana Adams]

Ooh. A dark and powerful poem.

Set my soul ablaze with eternal fire
Bring me to my knees
'til I change my heart's desire

I really love these lines in particular. Great poem! :)

[Blue]

My favorite lines as well. Thank you, Shaquana.

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot in this poem. Mercy, sin and forgiveness. Three words we will learn and understand well in a long life. I don't know. Old age had taught me. I'm glad I tasted life and fell down many times. If we don't bleed, you had never lived and tested life. A powerful poem. Open the door to questions we cannot answer till death take us home. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Blue]

Wow, thank you for sharing with me your wisdom, Coyote.