Oh, woman!

to all women concerned

Glorious descendant of Eve.

Creature shaped after Adam.

Blessed with beauty.

Blessed with heart.

What insult!

What woe to self you inflict!

Degrading.

Detestable.

Inhuman.

Sacred flesh

you now cheaply expose,

feasted upon

by eyes void of chastity.

Unlawful acts

you shamelessly conduct

to satiate

carnal pleasures

to gain

fleeting approval of men.

Take caution.

Gain wisdom.

Redeem your honor!

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

OK now I'm thinking of a stripper....thanks for the image ( : O ) .... but I do get your point

[Blue]

Understandable. I'm thinking of women who sell themselves cheap. Thank you, Roger.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. You gave great wisdom. Poem goes for men and woman. It is sad we destroy our bodies and minds.
"Take caution.
Gain wisdom."
The above lines are fact. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Blue]

Thank you, Coyote.

[Mark]

mmm... why is it we hold women responsible for an evolutionary fact? Interesting write.

[Blue]

Thank you, Mark.

[Simon Welsh]

Blunt. Nicely written, hon.

[Blue]

Thank you, Elliot.

[Hatchling]

Wow! Every woman should read this

[Blue]

Thank you so much!

[Rene Velez]

Good work, I think every woman or young woman should read this.

[Blue]

Thank you, Rene.

[Bowers]

This was wonderful, what a great piece! Nicely done!

[Blue]

Thank you, Bowers.

[Praveeta]

Excellent piece Arzel. Greatly enjoyed.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Praveeta.

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[m.s.early]

Incredibly indicative of the contemporary adolescent, and unfortunately ones that might think themselves mature. In modesty is a chase and the goal is the worthy. Exposure is cheap and so is what it gains.

[Blue]

Thank you for your intelligent insights, silver. Greatly appreciated!

[Calibaster]

I love this! This is soooooo goooooooooooood! I absolutely hate how morals have degraded over time, and how women are portraying themselves as objects to get the acceptance from men that we all crave! I'm so happy that I'm not the only one that thinks this way, you portrayed it sooooo well! I love how you always pick topics that totally relate to nowadays … me … I'm writing poems about star trek. (you know how it is) ;) Very well done, way to not mince words. ;) :) I have to show this to my dad. (It really is that awesome.)

[Blue]

Wow, Alverrann! I was a bit down tonight but your words chased the gloom away. Thank you so much!

[Calibaster]

You're very welcome! It's always nice to know you're not the only one who thinks the way you do. ;)