I Don't Know Erotica

So...can you teach me?

My lover...

I am a poet.

But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...

undress my ignorance

and write me an experience?

I am like a delicate paper,

consumed with the desire to be felt--

Just promise you'll be gentle?

Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches

and discover a potential universe.

Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...

Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.

Yes...

Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

Author's Note

*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

Reviews

[Mark]

This is very beautiful. Moving and sensual.

[Blue]

Thanks a lot, Mark.

[Eddie Davis]

Very interesting, the interchange between poetry and erotica. There are some similarities, as both rise out of passion and follow form and function to a certain conclusion.

Poetry, however, can be shared with everyone, whereas if you did that with erotica, you just end up doing porn...

Neat poem, Blue.

[Blue]

Thank you, Eddie. That's exactly what I want to avoid--ending up writing a porn.

[Frieda P]

Can't tell a bit that you're not comfy Arzel! Very sensual, just enough heat my young friend. This is scrumptiously delicious... yes poetry and passion are an elixir that could seduce anyone. Kudos!

[Blue]

Wow, thanks, Frieda. I find erotica a very interesting theme.

[Frieda P]

Ha you and about a gazillion other people ;-) My pleasure always.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

This is very, very brilliant. It acts erotica, yet part of it deals with poetry. You should read some of mine erotica, that is if you want.

[Blue]

Thank you, Greg. Just send me RRs. I enjoy reading erotica especially the un-crude ones.

[ron]

Very sensual. This is a delicate erotic poem, to be made love to with words.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Ron.

[ron]

You are most welcome.