What I Miss the Most

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What I miss the most

 

 

I don’t miss your words

And the pauses in between.

I don’t miss your pictures

That you send to be seen.

 

I don’t miss your chuckle

When my joke is so lame.

I don’t miss the attention

When you stop playing your game.

 

I don’t miss the songs

You tell me to listen to.

I don’t miss your laugh

When you’re not being true.

 

I don’t miss your eyebrows

When you look at me in jest.

I don’t miss your comfort

When you tell me I’m the best.

 

I don’t miss you, my love,

And sorry that is true.

‘Cause what I miss the most

is the sleep I never knew.

Author's Note

I haven't experienced any good night sleep this week. And the academic pressure is making my brain duller than ever. This is not a quality poem but...*yawn*

Reviews

[Spacecadet]

This started off real good, reminded me a little of the famous "10 things I hate about you" poem, so it really had my attention there and then there came the underplayed, under-dramatic end! Humorous twist, I like it!

[Blue]

I think that's where I got the inspiration. I watched the movie weeks ago and I like the element of surprise. ;) The bad boy is hot. And what a crazy school, I might add. :P

Thanks for the compliment!

[Spacecadet]

I had my own rendition of it back in high school. It was about one of my very first crushes, so glad it was lost along the way, it has to be one of the most embarrassing things I've ever written. Haha :P
Bad boy was hot indeed and as for high schools, I've seen crazier! :P
You are welcome!

[Blue]

Do you still have a copy of what you wrote? I enjoy reading poems written about teenage crushes no matter how embarrassing or crazy. ;)

[Spacecadet]

I don't. I think I dropped the only copy in his locker, anonymously. Haha!
I'll try digging up some of my old stuff and send it your way :)

[Blue]

Yes,please. And hey,that's brave of you! Though I think it would be braver if you put your name on it. ;) I remember doing the same thing to my first love. I cornered him and handed the poem and ran away. Ahh, good old days. ;)

[Spacecadet]

Haha, I know right?! I miss school. And I could never put my name on it! That was as much courage as I could muster up back then! :P

[ron]

This is so funny Blue. I know all to well about missing sleep.

[Blue]

So hellish, right? O.o

[Blue]

Thanks for the sympathy, Ron. ;)

[ron]

Your most welcome Blue. I once spent 2 weeks in training and got maybe about 2 may 3 hours of sleep a day.