DREAMS

Tears flow from heart
Which has been torn  apart

Blood flows from pain
Which never seem to drain

Love flows from feelings 
Which always seem to be hurting 

Dreams flow from your brain
Which gives you hope to live again

Reviews

[Legolas]

Short. A couple more stanzas would have made a beautiful poem even better

[Falling Leaf.]

Hmmm....interesting. A nice poem. There's just one thing. The second line, the word thrown. Doesn't seem to go with the phrase. Maybe torn instead?
Other than that, well penned!
~The Wilted Rose

[Marissa]

short, sweet, and real

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like it! Uh 2nd line shouldn't that be actually say been? If not ok sorry. I like how you compared the flowing of these things. Great write