Poem

I thought I'd write a little poem
So that I could really showem
I put down some happy words
They all said it was absurd
I looked at it and thought a bit
Fiddled round and played with it
In the end I was defeated
And pushed the key that said deleted

Reviews

[Abhishek Ram]

This is awesome. I love the irony of this poem and how relatable it is to poets everywhere.

[Willard Wells]

"showem " to "show em". Nice short verse for your first piece here.

[Richard🖌]

It's actually "show 'em", Willard … 'em being the elision of "them".

[Dad Dragonfire]

Awwww... that's beautiful! And the irony here is that you were not defeated after all :)

[andrew mitchell]

Very cute and a clever ditty!. Clint:)

[andrew mitchell]

I hope you get that understanding from being misunderstood!!

[Gee]

Nice,one we can all relate to

[Valentine]

A very cute and laughable write. Valentine

[africa]

Thank you Garrshaw. Precisely, that is my point. I can't write, hence not knowing the keys.

[Shredwick]

very clever, and thank you for reading my story

[Gaurav Bhattacharya]

Made me smile. :) Go on and show 'em Africa :)

[garrshaw]

I like it ... since there is no key called deleted, 'I claimed defeat' would work too.