as we lay

stolen love - cherished

 

we danced to gregory abbott's favorite tune

shake you down

you belong to another

that's known -- all over town

i had another with me

but you stole my heart

i saw you with him

and knew you had to be torn apart

you sent me a note

from a dear friend of yours

it said meet me tonight at three

right outside of these doors

i dropped mine off and hurried back

while you let yours take you home

my heart exploded

when i saw you running back so that we can be alone

we made love -- and then introduced ourselves

what was right was right -- and that we knew

we fell asleep in each others arm

after we did the things that only lovers know to do

morning is here now and you are still asleep

i put a cube of ice in my mouth and trace your body to wake you

as soon as you jump - i push the remote to hear

morning - and we slept the night away

it happen -- and we can't turn back the hands of time

yes we stole love this morning

images unfold in the banks of my mind

did we steal -- or did we discover

are we friends or are we lovers

you -- you -- and me -- me and you

oh you got me on high

mornings here

and i don't want to say good-bye

yes we stole love this morning

and we have to face the simple facts

i am ready to say good-bye to mine

and tonight -- welcome you back

as we lay

after vision

 

Reviews

[zombiikillah666]

this is really sweet. i loved reading it. good job. :D

[Syndel]

simply hot ..........thats all I am going to say wish I could get my pen to move

[deeps]

Wow! This is amazing, i really enjoyed this write here.
This is very well written.

[A.Lee]

This had a bit of a rough start at first, I thought, but it came together nicely. I ended up liking it a lot. Personally, I wouldnt have used couplets since your rhyme scheme is AB CB. I would group them together: ABCB. But thats just me, you dont have to. Nice work.