It has finally grown late

hold on to how you feel

Playing, The Fireside - Yo La Tengo

It has finally grown late

The sun - long ago set

The earth has turned a page

In our book.

We sneaked a quick look back

Forbidden

One last chance to feel a punch in our stomachs.

Shhhhhhhhh

We breathe out slowly, with relief

The sun - long ago set

It has finally gotten late

Goodnight,

rest easy.

Reviews

[Justin]

That was very creative!!! The presentation was really good, u were able to get your message across!!! Great job!!!

[Richard simpson]

Love it. I like the sound and heart it carries beating on and on. It's an amazing , yet, unsettling feeling to hold in your writing. Ignore the short and sweet grow longer next time. If you want...

[Alisa]

Thank you! I really enjoyed your insight, I wish there was more of that. I'm not sure I understand the last part of what you said - to grow longer next time, in length? elaboration? I do tend to write shorter things usually, I get restless quickly.