Tobacco twisted reveries

Tobacco twisted reveries

Befriend that of the isolated night,

And with the stained taste

Charring the shadows abound

We dance round and round and around.

Reviews

[Enam Korley]

I loved the title! But for some reason, I feel like I would have been more than satisfied with the first stanza. I feel like it had so much more impact and could stand on its own. Great! Thank you for sharing.

[Mister_Ryan]

That's why I love this place, I never thought about cutting this one but your are absolutely right in that the first stanza does stand on its own. Thank you for reading and for your help.