Park Bench

When you think you've lost it all,
when you feel like there is nothing left,
go sit on a park bench with a beautiful girl
for hours into the night,
and see if that does you some good
like it did me.

Reviews

[Chris Bighorse]

Beautiful. Really. Our park benches are buried in snow right now and it's pretty cold. But the next warm summer night . . . I do think that the first two lines are the same line, just said different ways. I think one of them could go, I don't think it matters which. Other than that I really like this. I've written something of the same caliber called Regret. Give it a look if you feel like it. Peace.