Broken

my life is broken

you promised forever

but you lied

broken promises,broken vows

 

things changed, you changed

you broke my heart

you tried to kill my soul

everything was never to be the same

 

you told me you loved me

you promised forever

but you lied

what am i to do now?

 

you took my life

tried to mold me to what

you thought i should be

to be mindless, obedient, a nothing

 

the one thing you didn't understand

that my will is my own

i no longer was yours to control

i am my own person

 

now my life is broken

but i am free

no longer a mindless thing

i belong to me and no one else

 

i am me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

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I like this. The flow is good. I like what you had to say. I like the last stanza. Very good!

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

very nice. the beginning is kinda cliche, but i defiantely like the second to third paragraph.

[Celtic Cat]

Amen, honey, amen. It takes much courage to walk away from a situation like that....more than most people can muster. Congrats to you for standing tall and taking your power back. Sounds like you've already found the silver lining in this one...good luck on your brave new world!! Excellent piece.

[Runa]

So beautiful, I can feel the pain this person went through of this love. Greatly written and it captures my heart.

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

nicely written