My Demon

we all have our demons....

 

 

In the mist of my dreams

Where the swirl of time, of space

Are one and the same

Meshing together in one dimension

 

In the back of my mind

You are a shadow

An eternal being

Always there

 

You appear at my call

You nurture and care for me

A perpetual being

Dark angel

 

 

In the light of day, I search for you

A figment of the imagination

An indistinguishable silhouette

Are you there in the waking consciousness?

 

Are the worlds of reality and of dreams

One and the same?

To distinguish between the two

A fine line, to the conscious mind….

 

Author's Note

just something i pulled out of the blue...and WoW...lol. AT

Reviews

[Dani California]

Are the worlds of reality and of dreams
One and the same?
To distinguish between the two
A fine line, to the conscious mind�.


Ah, yes. A subject of deep interest for me..
This is a great question, and a great piece!
I have such lucid dreams sometimes it becomes
difficult for me to distinguish fact from fiction..

Such is life.. in any realm.

Great work my friend!

[With Each Raindrop Come..]

Wow, very passionate poem, I love it! Keep sending in those read requests!

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Simply brilliant! An exploration of the mind. This is my favorite stanza:

"In the light of day, I search for you
A figment of the imagination
An indistinguishable silhouette
Are you there in the waking consciousness?"

[Michael X]

this has to be read at least twice firstly, in order to absorb the
full depth as well as the masterful thought put into every word,
i loved this poem, it stands by itself, and has features inspired.
as your words take the reader to another time and place, the dark ambience
is sweeping, the concept is really awsome. you've aced this, amanda.

[R J Askew]

Like this...it is like a description of the creative process, with ideas lurking in the subconscious and then being nailed down by the mind, hopefully with a beating heart still in them.

In the back of my mind...you are a shadow....... THAT is a perfect description of how I think about poems! You know they are there, but...

Yes, I like this one!

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Excellent !! pulling out of the blue brings forth true expression of the inner sanctuary of the soul..Excellent work.


Lasla

[XxHerHeroxX]

keep pulling things out of the blue bc that seems to work alot for me too