Whispering Dream

...can you hear hear me whispering to you?....

 

 

In the stillness of the night

In the land of dreams,

Where the alternate realm shines,

There is just you and I

 

No problems, no issues

Just the love we share

The intertwining of our hearts and souls

We are of one mind

 

Everything disappears, left behind,

Nothing can disturb us now

In this reality of our making

All else is nonexistent

 

In this beautiful private garden

Where nothing or no one can touch us

We laugh, we play and we make love

Becoming one with the joining

 

Close your eyes and think of me

For I am never far away,

Take my hand, don’t be afraid

I will show you the way

 

I am the whisper in your heart

And in your mind

I am the whispering dream

That calls to you in the dark.

 

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Close your eyes and think of me
For I am never far away
Take my hand don't be afraid
I will show you the way

Amanda, you have gone above and beyond with this one as I am left in awe after reading such a perfect combination of desire and love. Verb choice is fantastic...laughing, playing, whispering... making love...
the epitome of all that enables two to become one.

It's fantastic when our whispering dreams surface and become reality.

I am the whispering dream
That calls to you in the dark.

So very, very sensual. Photo enhances both longing and the beauty of love.

Wow, my friend, you're on fire girl! :-)
x

[David Lucero]

Very good! I like the details. I've never been much of a poem writer, but I like yours.

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

I am the whisper in your heart

And in your mind

I am the whispering dream

That calls to you in the dark

Amanda I really like these lines I found passion and reservation but also a great distance of heart here and the desire for togetherness through love.A exceptional write here my friend you have gone above and beyond with this one and is so passionate well done!!!!!

Lasla

[Steffi]

"Everything disappears, left behind,
Nothing can disturb us now
In this reality of our making
All else is nonexistent

In this beautiful private garden
Where nothing or no one can touch us
We laugh, we play and we make love
Becoming one with the joining"
What a beautifuly constructed love poem. the words just flow together nicely in a moving piece.
Great Write!

[The DuchessPoet]

"In the whispers of your heart...
I'm llost in your passionate exchange
i am addicted to what you give!

again, very well done, my passionate poet

[Rain]

A true love poem, written with words that have no double meanings...the way I like it, and what gives it power. Excellent piece. Rain..

[THE LOST ROSE]

I should highlight all the parts of this poem I do love but then I would be just reciting the whole poem. Amazing write. These words belong together. I am so sorry it took me so long to get to this piece. This has been under my nose all of this time. I could of been inspired a couple of weeks ago DAMN!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Wow! This is beautiful!


I am the whisper in your heart
And in your mind
I am the whispering dream
That calls to you in the dark.


This is really so sensual and deep, I loved the choice of your words too!
Great work.

[Brianna Brie]

Sounds like a beautiful haven that two people created. One that beckons to you both in the craziness of life. Lovely write.

[~Mary Ann~]

The connection between two people.. the love that is shared... nothing else matters...
This piece makes the heart sigh...

Amazing ink! :)

[R J Askew]

Beautiful job, very ethereal. The last two verses are great. 'Take my hand, don't be afraid...I will show you the way' is my favourite moment, as who would not love to experience such a blissful invite? The whole is calming, giving and loving.