when the clouds make rain

Kinda always knew

As pessimists usually do

That the world is cruel

That my plans were falling through

 

Blue skies come and go

Blue hearts tend to show

When all you ever know

Is how to die and grow

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God how sweet..i knew i swear from the first few words,i knew i found a great talent here
some magic ,oh so sweet so lovely..how i loved this ,in a few words,you put all tragedy of life
and our misery in such a sweet tender voice you turned it to a sweet sad song..
kinda always knew..as pessimists always do,the world is cruel
and my life is falling through...
blue skies come and go..blue hearts will show..all will just know
how to die and how should not grow..
what beauty..this was so great ,how i loved this
lovely write..

[Masq]

Excellent write! So simple yet very profound. I've always admired writers with the ability to say alot with so little words. Personally, I feel that I tend to be a little wordy in my delivery. But I'm contantly learning and growing as an artist. Again, I think you did a great job with this poem and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.