Time and Destiny

What am I doing here?

Is destiny a reality? If so, where am I on the map?

Am I close to the finish line of success or am I about to pass out from dehydration?

 I’m tired

of running.

I am unable to tell one minute from the next and the hands of the clock are always moving

 in that ridiculous clockwise motion. Everything happened too quickly so there must be a

 God. Because the idea of infinity with past and future intertwined leaves no option for 

me. I have to believe in something. 

 I can’t quite put the pieces of this puzzle together and the fact that it’s a puzzle of more

 than one million pieces makes me uncomfortable. 

What I do know is that my mistakes are somewhere behind me, in my past.  

They are a secret only I know but still, they remain alive because of whispers.

 And those are relentless in my present. 

Will oblivion sweetly occur when I open the door to my destiny? 

Or will my fingerprints never leave that damn doorknob… 

Reviews

[Collyn]

Beautifully written! Only a couple punctuation problems. Also, had some trouble understanding, maybe you could be a little more descriptive? If you aren't looking for feedback, disregard :) Wonderful!

[sweetsaltywords]

Haha, thanks so much! I'll look over the punctuation! Wrote it at night so didn't check too much there. Thank you Collyn :)

[Collyn]

Haha I do the same thing