febuary 17, 2011.

It's just a displeasing shame

to hear a fear, screaming my name.

While I'm worthless to look down

rundown walls,

& scattered thoughts echoing through

abandoned hospital halls.

As I'm weakening with every breath

& every shot has got me down further,

oh God, please make the pain stop

before I have to go away.

So far away,

& so I won't have to hear my name.

If you were closer, would you hold me?

Because these moments

that shouldn't be captured without you.

And since I'm so far away again

I'll never forget hair strands

running askew in my fingers.

And my faltering breath

can forever be remembered

but embedded in my heart

is something so much better.

♥ 

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Seems like someone is trapped in a cold place of pain, misery and loneliness and really really needing someone. I take it this cold place is a hospital. Very stark, vivid and rather frightening. I give this a 100. I like it.