Good Luck With the Tide

Good Luck With the Tide

A Poem by kenzie evans

I watch the waves rising,
but there's nothing left to do.
Will it be surprising
when the smash over you?

You stood with your back to the sea
What did you expect?
That if you stood there casually,
you;d gain the ocean's respect?

Well, passiveness, ain't always best
It's your turn to move
your stubbornness towards the current
what are you trying to prove?

She'll pull herself together, let go of forever
and she'll get on with her life;
as you'll lay there with sand in your hair
she'll say "Good luck with the tide."

Tranquillity isn't assured
with the waters ebb and flow,
don't think you're all secure;
the Great Blue can't be controlled.

The wind on your face
and the water seems swirling and sweet
not ready, or bracing -
You're really that blind to defeat.

Playfully splashing, can't hear the crashing
it's your turn to move
put up walls inside - think you'll be safe & dry?
What are you trying to prove?

She'll pull herself together, let go of forever
and get on with her life
as you lay there, with sand in your hair
she'll say "Good luck with the tide."

The air is thick and misting, 
But you're not listening
Those salt water kisses aren't real, the swells are breaking
with the mistakes you're making.

Well, passiveness ain't always best
it was your turn to move your stubbornness
towards the current
what were you trying to prove?

I pulled myself together, let go of forever,
and got on with my life.
as you laid there with sand in your hair,
I said "Good luck with the tide."

© 2011 kenzie evans


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kenzie evans
kenzie evans

Nova Scotia, Canada



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hi, my names kenzie. i have lots to say about to say about myself but I dont know where to start, so this is all going to sound a little jumbbled to you. thats okay though, its my style. i love the.. more..