Untitled #2

Letting go

as a parting of glass,

or a shattering of the soul.

The pieces will rest where they fell,

and all seems lost.

But,

from the destruction

there is renewal.

Life is lived,

and lessons are learned.

Reviews

[Speaking Sandclocks]

Precise , clear statements give this piece its beauty.However consider using 'as' in place of 'like'. :)

[Aidan]

Thanks for the suggestion!