Those Smiling Eyes..by Michael

It was her smiling eyes that I noticed the most when
We first met. A visual communication which she also received
Right back, as if looking in a mirror. A form of thoughts coming
From the heart and soul which tells no lies as
Sometimes the tongue will often do. A pure truth of
Emotions that cannot be denied nor disputed.
Those smiling eyes continued for a lifetime of pure
Love for one another as it may be seen on
The cover of our wedding album. Before listening to words,
Always look for those smiling eyes...
 
 
 
 
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Reviews

[Justin Robben]

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing; I enjoyed this touching piece very much. It's interesting...how your style seems to carry a bit of sadness in it, even when the message is uplifting and joyous as this one.
That's not a knock, but a compliment. I enjoyed this one.

[Michael Reisman]

Thank you you so much my dear friend for enjoying this.

[Yanina McKnight]

I love the formatted structure of this poem, your ideas flow quite nicely. I like the imagery, which strengthens the idea of love between the two characters in the work.
Such beauty within your words.
Thank you for sharing your work.

-Yanina

[Michael Reisman]

Your most beautiful compliment touches my heart and I thank you so much!

[Yanina McKnight]

I'm glad :) you're very welcome!