HAIKU 7 (15.12.11)

Day 7/7

In the beach at dawn

The longing sea kissed the sand

And the tide went high.

Reviews

[Matthew Smith]

Honestly, I don't like haiku poems.

Honestly, I did like this. It is rare when I come across one I like.

And what that one fellow said. One cannot be "in" a beach. Well, it is possible, but I can't imagine it'd be too pleasant.

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this is wonderful, I really enjoy Haiku's

[Larry Dyson]

On the beach?