Until Tomorrow

Having never written a Haiku or Tanka poem before, I thought it would be nice to write something different for a change. Here is my Tanka poem:

Endless is your voice

Echoing deep in my mind

The pain will not go

You are gone from me tonight

Goodbye my sweet love, for now.

Reviews

[EDDAIDJ Badr Eddine]

One day, even our souls will say goodbye ..... i like your poem

[A Jackson]

Thank you for your comments

[Little Whisper]

I'm so sorry for the pain you are feeling at this time. Your expression through your words brings the reader into your anguish....I wish I could give you a hug. No one can take your inner art from you regardless off the pain they cause. Your strength shows in your willingness to share your pain. Your answers are in your words. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. ...your gift with us.

[A Jackson]

Thank you, please check out the rest of my writing :-) Would love to hear your thoughts