Pain Lost

I don't write erotic poems often, and when I do I leave them to myself, but I decided why not. Small, simple scenario I came up with.

"All this pain," she said, her hands 

unfastening her bra without him noticing.

"All this pain you felt before I will make go away."

"How?" he asked with his head hanging low.

He looked up when the bra hit his face

to see a sympathetic grin on her face.

"I'll make you feel so good." When she mounted him,

he felt her warm soft breasts hit him first.

She was in control.

Reviews

[Cherry]

That's a powerful statement to make without saying a word.

[Aaron Jinks]

Expand please.

[Cherry]

The fact that sex was a way to please him and make him feel better portrayed her power over his problem.

[Aaron Jinks]

Ahh. Very good point.