so much depends
A Poem by
avery
creative writing poem
so much depends
upon
the quack of a
duck
breaking the
silence
in a desolate
pond.
© 2015 avery
Reviews
i like the part where the cow goes on the train
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This feels so deep yet it's so simple about a ducks quack, his otherwise meaningless quack seems so powerful
Posted 10 Years Ago
This feels so deep yet it's so simple about a ducks quack, his otherwise meaningless quack seems so powerful
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I feel like this has deeper meaning, like something along the lines that god breaks the sinful silence with his beautiful call. This is a masterpiece avery, good job
Posted 10 Years Ago
I feel like this has deeper meaning, like something along the lines that god breaks the sinful silence with his beautiful call. This is a masterpiece avery, good job
really high quality stuff. 10/10. nice vocab choice. like a finely aged cheese. really gets the mind going with some solid imagery.
Posted 10 Years Ago
really high quality stuff. 10/10. nice vocab choice. like a finely aged cheese. really gets the mind going with some solid imagery.
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Added on August 31, 2015
Last Updated on August 31, 2015
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avery columbus, OH
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my favorite fruit snacks are the ones in the shape of dinosaurs
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