the lost sea

A Poem by rhadamanthys

lost sea
ocean apart from
life and death
tears were left here long
dozen memories
lost through the sea of pain
so long ago this forgotten

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I like the shortness of this poem. It covers a lot of territory in just a few lines. Nice

momo	its good but you should keep on with it! like add more to it you can make an awesome story behind this poem Posted 15 Years Ago its good but you should keep on with it! like add more to it you can make an awesome story behind this poem Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 6, 2010
Last Updated on October 29, 2010

just a human being nothing more nor less ): im outgoing and like to talk and do listen i like anime like playing piano and drawing more..