SHATTERED HEART

                              SHATTERED HEART  

                  Sitting lonely in the dark,

                my tears shed drop by drop,

          as if my face was like a rotten crop.....

   That night brought on a me a shower of              curse, and i was the only one,

     whom people was thinking is worse.....

       My smile flew away in the hell's air,

         where there is no love and care.....

  Then i realized, i trusted the wrong one,   

   and from her side, justice to me done...

    When i was abused, without listening my           excuse, my heart  broke down, as if             somebody has taken my life's crown....           

                                                                

Reviews

[Gaurav]

sweet enough to read :) nicely written...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

this one has the matter....but i feel you could have done a bit better...but i liked it..the rhyming was good..poem flowd nicely