Like I do

I just wanna see you bleed

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's no way you'll be through

Cause there ain't nobody who can seduce you like I do

 

I just wanna see you cry

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's nothing to save you from you

Cause their ain't nobody who can hurt you like I do

 

I like it when you're on the floor

Begging for more

It feels so good to see you cry

I don't know why

 

I just wanna see you hurt

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's no one to run to

Cause their ain't nobody who does it like I do it to you

 

 

Reviews

[alesuriko]

This is a really good seduction piece for someone into S&M. Definitely sensual and it has a good rhythm to it.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

dual tranced~ a morphing through~ flavors of sadomasochism replete throughout~
sharp and eerie~ grabs the reader with its raw edge~

[Katie Louise Hughes]

I'm not sure if in this piece you are feeling sad and almost regretful, or being honest. It is very interesting, and I think this could be a song as mentioned in a previous review. Thanks, and keep up the work! :D

[loowzerX]

despite being kinda weird, i like this one :]

[Moonflower]

i like the repetitivness, it seems lyrical. very nice write. :)

[DamienHino]

harsh love, like I'm better than you and you know it but what are you going to do about it...cool poem

[Wicahpi]

Not quite demented, but he's not
quite all there, either, by enjoying
another's suffering. Interesting read.
Keep writing! You're blooming :)

[Hillary Marie]

Wow, as people have said before, I like the whole "villain" take a lot. Refreshing from all those "broken heart" poems (no offense to broken heart poems :D). Like the rhythm and flow between the words.

[deeps]

I like this, emtional write.

[Matthew Kult]

That very last line may need a little tweeking.

However I like it. Good to see you and I come from a familiar beginning. I am much older but I do enjoy them sports too. I like the chance you took on the poem, not many like us are willing to make it "personal" and take on the "Villian" role in poetry. Good work. Keep it up.