Dance

At a club in northgate

The way you smell

Just tastes so sweet

Like candy to a kid

 

I can't help but lose myself

In the way you grind against me

I'm in a state of trance

 

I try to keep pace

But your just too good

And I just can't move

 

You know what I want

And you move so well

I can't keep my hands of off you

 

Your hair smells so good

I hold my breathe

Time stops for a second

 

All I can see in this place is you

But the music stops

Thanks for the dance

Reviews

[Madison A. Wright]

i enjoy this poem.. anything that has to deal with music is good by me, i love how u capture this moment...

[Cynthia]

Very Nice written! Like it, I love the theme as well.

[Blossom]

nice. I like it. I like the concept and the theme.

[Marie Harrison]

Ha! I like this read. Very clever.

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like the first stanza, good start..the emotional angst when dancing with a stranger is electric...good feeling in this

Nice ending!! :P :)

[Moonflower]

This is a very endearing piece, I enjoyed the ending. :)