You loved me so much

That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

You loved me so much
Also I am your son
That you had made me
In you own image
Many years ago
And placed me on earth
To live also with my brothers
We are already used
To live on earth
That is not a lie
Being sugar coated
We always tell you
The truth father
Be still
And wait for
The night to arrive
Because the day already ended
Very fast today
And soon the night
Will be here
And we will take a peek
At the sky at night
And we will see the
Stars and the moon
Shining on the water
Today it is a beautiful
Summer night
At 2:00 am
We will go to sleep
Tonight
You loved me so much
Also I am your son
That you had made me
In you own image
Many years ago
And placed me on earth to live
With my brothers
We are already used to live
On earth

Reviews

[Neha agrawal]

This reads like a gentle prayer or a quiet letter to a divine father — full of childlike trust, love, and the kind of soft repetition that makes it feel sacred and deeply human.