Road of Life

Do you experience riding in any vehicle? Do you ever try to sit on a shotgun seat? Well, if yes, do you see the road you are facing?

 

There is a right and wrong direction. Road is sometimes rough, but there's a time it is going smooth. There is a road in one direction but there are those that go in different ways. That is the road of life.

Every people have their own goals and dreams in life. Of course they want to fulfill those goals. Just try to imagine that your dreams are on the end of that road. There is no other direction but a straight line. When you encounter a rough road, that’s the time when you have trials, struggles or challenges in life. But there are also times that the road you are taking is just smooth, it means that you overcome those problems.

While traveling the road of life, you will encounter a road with many directions. There is a right, straight and left way. That different way represents the thing that we prioritize on like having a relationship or prioritizing our study. Just remember that our dreams are on the straight line. Don’t take the right or left direction because you don’t know what will be the consequences if you enter that way, you don’t know the consequences if you follow your heart at the wrong time. We should not find love, love should find us. There’s a right time for that but for now, we should focus on our study to fulfill our dreams.

Author's Note

Sorry if there is grammar problems. Is it good? I wrote this one when I was still young and I realized that I should post this in a site so that others can read and appreciate it. Thank you..

Reviews

[KillerWithWords]

This essay is very poetic. Essay, i call it, for lack of better words.
This is well written. I didn't notice any grammar problems. There seems to be a lot of "fluff" in this essay. A lot words that take up space but don't contribute to your point. The essay is short enough that it doesn;t ruin the flow. As you said, this was written a while ago, and your style most-probably has changed

[Alexa Louise Mendoza]

i'm just a newbie here, so i'm wondering is there an essay in the type of writing? Because I love making an essay but I can't find it's real category so I'd just pick story.

[KillerWithWords]

No, there isn't.
I've done the same thing you have...

[Alexa Louise Mendoza]

okay thank you..

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

This is beautiful. Sometimes I write something and there are some minor details that don't pertain to what I'm writing... Honestly I thought that eeverything you said pertained to your points. I would consider it to be an essay. It reminds me of something Seneca would write; it's a philosophical essay with a meaning/lesson in it. I am very much so a newbie at this too. But I wouldn't have none you were new from reading this. I thought it was lovely. :) Keep it up, girl!