Window seat

thoughts random and plane

Hilltops march to the mountain

with the devotion of time

Cloud tops bleed across the sky

with the discipline of waves

And dry river beds slumber

dreaming of the sea

Reviews

[Solar]

I like the way your poem connects a series of images with words like 'devotion' 'discipline' and 'dreaming'.

Poetry of nature and the process of living...

[Razaman]

thank you I appreciate your comments

[Solar]

You're welcome.

[Cherry]

One that makes you think and is not overdone with images. Nice poem.

[Razaman]

Thanks for reading my material and the nice comments