Exhaustive Energy

Written after many maddening nights of restlessness

Quarter to four is when I woke,

Like a motor going full-throttle in my brain,

I bounce from room to room

Objects are lifted and shifted

until I am left with a disheveled space

and the same thirst for peace. 

Reviews

[That Guy]

ARlorenz, very nice... 41 words neatly placed.
Thank you.

[J.Arthur.B]

Your text definetly gets stronger in the end. I also do that. I have wonder if i We really have to explain the scenario to writers before going to poetry itself.

What do you think

[ARLorenz]

The explanation is the poetry in many of my pieces. To leave the reader with no sense of where to direct their imagination leads to frustration in my experience.