TO THE SOUTH SEA

short instant poem

TO THE SOUTH SEA

Take me
to the south sea,
I have my board
ready,
I'm bored.
I'm eager to fly
over the waves,
Freedom,
No enslaves,
Reach the sky.

-- Alice Enamour

Reviews

[Arnav Gautam]

wow i can imagine
the breeze, the wave,
the harmony and the peace
that waves.
peaceful day ignoring the bad
makes you remember the day when you fell sad.

[aliceenamour]

Thank you, Arnav.

[Amy Pettit]

im already bad on my feet walking, i cant imagine even trying to surf. jealous! and good read :) love the writing

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I've always wanted to surf but never had the opportunity. I enjoyed the read.

[aliceenamour]

It's never too late
to try
before you die;
navigate,
escape your fate.