Nothingness

Life in the perspective of someone who can't tell up from down, watching their vision and all else that is real fade away.

My vision is extremely blurred

Reality is somewhat slurred

And somehow I feel like I’m falling

There is no sound, there is no voice, but I can hear someone calling

There is no earth, there is no sky

I am about to take a leap and fly

There is no day, and likewise no night

I am now in a high soaring flight

I see everything but there is nothing to see

I don’t know what’s happening to me

I was played in life like a meaningless pawn

I am here now but I am gone

Author's Note

constructive criticism always helps,
thanks =]

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

we write very similar
i enjoyed this piece very much

[Rambling Prose]

A nicely penned expression of nothingness, indeed. I was wondering about the format. Is this what is referred to as 'poetry prose'?

A very fine write, Alienkid...