MissUnderstanding

i never could make sense of our first meeting.

your drunken kiss,

the boyish grin.

you were a man

with a completely incomplete life.

i was a girl

trying to begin a life completely my own.

you told me i understood you

she didn’t.

but in the end, i didn’t understand,

did i?

the only person that will ever understand the mess of you

is you.

but you don’t,

do you?

Reviews

[Candi]

I like the way your growth is apparent in this. Love your excursion into poetry ~ it is a brave move!

[KamalTrivedi]

I love it!!! great job!

[Arabdha]

you have wrapped both love and hurt very articulately in your words..

[Unbeliever]

Short and snappy, yet completely descriptive & full of feeling. Quality.

[Jeff]

Powerful write. Defiant and strong.

[cfix]

I really enjoyed this I like the line "Your drunken kiss"
Very well written and enjoyable to read.